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Chasm
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 Posted February 21st, 2006 07:45 PM IP   
Good for Sage! Chasm also enjoys speaking in the third person.
back with a vengeance!!...or not
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The Sage of Light
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Posted February 21st, 2006 07:50 PM IP
Yay! Finally someone else that shares Sage's interest in third person speaking! Chasm should see Sage at school talking to Sage's friends.
RAWR, I'M A FIRE DRAGON... But not a flamer, at least XD
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Posted February 21st, 2006 07:58 PM IP
Sorry to interupt this oh-so interesting conversation but I just felt like taking all of the attention....again. So anyway, we like this chapter? Anyone have any better ideas for what the Dude is up to or can we all agree on this. Also, I didn't proof-read most of this so I'll get to that later.
Master Chief
Stoic and proud, you work well with a team, but are better on your own. You love technology and exotic locales, but often are left to your own devices. Keep the helmet on, you look cooler.
 
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The Sage of Light
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Posted February 21st, 2006 08:10 PM IP
....My toe itches... *Chews big toe*
RAWR, I'M A FIRE DRAGON... But not a flamer, at least XD
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Posted February 23rd, 2006 07:21 PM IP
Um...here's what I think the final draft of my chapter will be. It's the same thing but now with Proofreading Technology (I proofread it)...
The Day the Plot Stood Still
The Unanimated Series!
Episode 3: Super Happy Fun House Party Yeah!
(Sonic the Hedgehog is running through a thick jungle. After a while he starts jumping
from one tree to another and finds a very tall one to run up. From here, he starts grinding
along its long branches until he gets to its end point where he grabs onto a vine and swings on it. After going through a few vines, Sonic falls back down to the ground where he sees a loop-de-loop in the distance. Looking at it, he grins.)
Sonic: I love how these man-inspired stunts occur naturally!
(Sonic is about to pick up his speed a great deal in order to run through the loop but an immensely painful electric shock shoots through his entire body and sends him crashing to do the ground, cringing in an insane fit of rage and unbelievable pain as tears uncontrollably flow from his eyes and he screams at the top of his lungs.)
Sonic: GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! WHYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!???????????? WHAT…IS…THIS!? AH AH AH AH! WHAT IS THIS!?
(At this time, the electric current dies and Sonic is able to stop screaming and take a few deep breaths before sitting up, holding his head gingerly, and then starts to here voices in his head….That’s right, he’s insane now.)
Voice in Sonic’s head (look at him being crazy!): Hello? Sonic? Are you there?
Sonic (looking around to see the speaker): Tails? Wh-where are you?
Voice in Sonic’s head (still crazy!): Alright! It really did work! Wahoo! I can’t wait to try the one I put in Knuckles’ bu-
Sonic: Wait, wait, wait! What’s going on? Where are you buddy?
Tails (Sonic’s not crazy anymore…boo!): Heh heh. Sorry. Um, I put a tracking device in your skull a while ago and I wasn’t sure if it would work. But now that you’re talking to me I know it did!
Sonic: …Are you telling me that I had to put up with the shocking that I did just so you could see if something you put in my head without asking me first would work? Dude, I thought we were friends!
Tails: Aw…I’m sorry Sonic! Please don’t hate me! It’s just that…Something’s happened at my house and I got scared.
Sonic: But you always get scared. Of everything.
Tails: …But this is different.
Sonic: I’m serious man, everything! I mean if it isn’t imaginary ghosts or the dark, it’s the dust bunnies under you bed!
Tails: Awwww….Do you have to bring them up?
Sonic: And dare I go onto the whole monster movie thing? I was trying to beat Eggman a while back and you couldn’t help but cling to my leg cause you still remembered it!
Tails: But this time it’s different!
Sonic: How? Is it actually dangerous?
Tails: Awww, Sonic.
Sonic: Sorry pal. What is it?
Tails: You’re not gonna believe it! Some kind of hole opened in my house! I don’t know what it is but it’s scary and you’re the first one I called!
Sonic: Wait….Your house? Do you have any idea how far away you are from….where ever I am? I don’t even know where to start looking!
Tails: That’s okay. We’ll get to use my new teleporter! I’ve been dying to give this one a test drive!
Sonic: Test drive? Wait, I think I see your house from here! Um…Why don’t I just-GAH!
(Sonic fades from the jungle he’s in before he can say anything else. The next thing he knows, he’s in the underground lab in Tails’ Mystic Ruins home. The hedgehog looks around to see himself in a sort of room cut off from the rest of the lab with one white circle below him and another white circle on either side of him. Looking up, he sees Tails sitting at some kind of control panel with a gold visor over his eyes. Sonic stands up and walks up the fox.)
Sonic: Hey Tails…Have you been watching that stupid show about the bald guy in the space ship again?
Tails: Huh? (Remembers he’s wearing the visor and where he got the idea for the teleporter and quickly takes the visor off) No.
Sonic: Well, where’s this hole thing?
(Tails leads Sonic to an elevator that they use to go above ground to the rest of Tails’ house. After walking out of the garage and upstairs, they walk into Tails’ bedroom. The bedroom’s walls are painted blue with millions and millions of newspaper pictures of Sonic posted on almost every available space. Sonic looks around and shudders before Tails takes him by the hand and pulls up to a large golden hole in his room’s wall.)
Tails: I think it’s a portal leading to another dimension that may have not always been there but just in a smaller form. My guess is that it was forced to grow to this size under some kind of condition. I’m not sure if it was natural or if somebody made it grow.
(A completely black dude can be seen peering through the window at Sonic and Tails. He lets out a little gasp and then ducks before anyone can see him. Sonic drools after hearing what Tails just said before the fox snaps his fingers and wakes him up.)
Sonic: Tails, if you knew all of that on your own, why’d you call me here?
Tails (hiding behind Sonic and wrapping his arms around his waist): Cause it’s scary.
Sonic: (Sigh) How someone could be as smart as you and be afraid of the thing in his closet (Tails screams and jumps up to Sonic’s shoulders at hearing the closet thing)…is beyond me. I bet Knucklehead would know about this.
(Suddenly, Knuckles bursts through the wall, throws Sonic to the side, and slams Tails against a wall.)
Knuckles: What did you do with the Master Emerald!?
Tails: Huh? Oh! That! Don’t you remember? I left you a note saying I was borrowing it to see if I could…Hmm…What did I use it for….
Knuckles: No you didn’t! You stole the Master Emerald and tried to trick me by leaving a small piece of paper with a bunch of pictures on it behind!
Tails: That was the note. I wrote on it….Can you read?
(Knuckles’ angry stare becomes meek and he blushes before going out of his way to throw the fox to the floor. He turns around with his arms folded)
Knuckles: Of course I can! Question is: can you write? Cause that…was very bad write…stuff.
Sonic: You mean handwriting?
Knuckles: There you go making up words again! Anyway, I want the Master Emerald and I (notices portal) AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! SAVE ME! SAVE ME!
(Knuckles runs up to Sonic and hides behind him. His screaming only frightens Tails who also runs behind Sonic. Sonic rolls his eyes and sighs before pushing Knuckles off to the side. Knuckles is sporting a sly grin as Tails continues to cry.)
Knuckles: I was wondering if that would work.
Sonic: What?
Knuckles: I scream to freak him out.
(Sonic sends a quick kick to Knuckles’ face, knocking him down.)
Sonic: Now then, you know anything about this portal?
(Rouge the Bat flies in through Knuckles’ hole with the Master Emerald in tow in a huge net.)
Rouge: Looks like you got yourself a class A-9 Alpha portal there.
Sonic (jumping back in surprise): Where’d you come from!?
Tails: What’s an A-9 Alpha portal?
Rouge (now teasing Knuckles by flying in the room and pulling the Master Emerald out of his reach every time he jumps for it): A portal that leads to a specific place and can be used to go to either end of itself.
Sonic (drooling): Huh?
Rouge: (Sigh) It means this portal goes to a determined place, and not just any random spot whenever you use it. And that the people on the other end of the portal can use it to come here and vice versa!
(Rouge slams a dunce cap on Sonic’s head.)
Tails: Hey!
Sonic: Where’d you get this?
Knuckles: I swear! If you don’t give me the Mas-OOF!
(Rouge swung the Master Emerald at Knuckles just before he could finish his sentence. Knuckles is sent flying out of the room and out through a window. As Sonic and Tails try to pull the incredibly tight dunce cap off of Sonic’s head, Rouge places the Master Emerald down and admires the portal.)
Rouge: You know, it’s not every day you see one of these.
Tails: Do you have any idea how it got here?
Rouge: Hmmmm…Unless this is what happened to JFK and Jimmy Hoffa, I have no idea. I don’t know anyone who could make a portal. Let alone put one in your room.
(The roof of the house is blown off and everyone looks up to see an armada of red and yellow ships flying in the air. Doctor Robotnik….FINE…Eggman flies in through the huge hole in the roof in his Eggmobile and looks at the portal.)
Sonic: Dude! You blew up Tails’ roof!
Tails (as if in a trance): Look at all those machines….
Eggman (God, I’m gonna have to clean my mouth out with soap for saying that name!): Huh? Oh yeah. Blew up his roof cause um….Shut up! And yeah. Lots of machines. If I give you one of them will you shut up about them?
Tails (bright-eyed and cheery): REALLY!?
Eggman: No. Just wanted to see if that ploy would work. Anyway, I didn’t make this portal. You can tell by how inferior it is. Now if I made a portal,
Sonic: Which you haven’t.
Eggman: ….But if I did-
Sonic: But you can’t.
Eggman: Grrrr….
Sonic (turning to Tails): Tails, why don’t you get all of these guys to clear out? It’s not my house so I can’t really kick ‘em out.
(Sonic is surprised to see that Tails isn’t where he was standing but is coming in through the door to the room, carrying a tray of drinks. Tails walks by Sonic and gives him one of the drinks before walking up to Rouge and….Eggman….and giving them a drink each.)
Sonic (grimacing at what looks like a perfectly normal drink): Tails, what are you doing?
Tails: Sorry Sonic. I just got everyone drinks. I don’t wanna be a bad host.
(Rouge grabs Tails by the shoulder and pulls him in to her, lifting him off of his feet with one hand and shouting at his face.)
Rouge: What is this!?
Tails: W-w-w-what do you mean?
Rouge: I asked for fruit punch, not cherry!
(Rouge drops Tails and spikes the glass into his face, shattering it and sticking shards into his face. Tails begins to cry as he gets up and tries to remove them from his face.)
Rouge: Keep those in there!
Tails: Sorry.
(As Tails makes his way out of the room, Robot….crud, Eggman looks at the juice, bored. He tips the glass over and is pleased to watch the portal suck the juice into it. He grins at this but frowns the grin once there is no more juice. He throws the glass at Tails and hits him directly in the back of the head just before he walks out of the room.)
Eggman: Me too!
Sonic (speaking through his teeth): You know what? I was okay with the wall, a little mad about the roof, and just plain weirded out by the juice. But when you do that to my bro, I don’t care if he wants you here or not! I’m gonna-
(Sonic is cut short when a pink flash bursts through floor and lands in front of him. The blur is revealed to be Amy Rose as she grabs Sonic in a bear hug and lifts him off of his feet.)
Sonic (choking): Amy….!
Amy: HA! I FOUND YOU SONIC! NOW YOU HAVE TO MARRY ME!
Sonic: …Why?
Amy (with a confused look on her face but not letting up with the hug): ….Well, I uh…Um….MARRY ME!
(Sonic slithers out of Amy’s grasp and jumps on top of a book shelf and throws books at Amy as she tries to climb up after him.)
Rouge: Can you believe the nerve of that fox?
Eggman: Honestly! You clearly asked for lemonade and he has the nerve to bring you that crap!
Rouge: He better not mess up again if he knows what’s good for him.
(Tails comes back into the room with another tray of drinks. Sonic runs up to him and throws the whole tray at Amy and hides behind Tails as she brushes the fruit punch off of herself.)
Amy: You’re so immature Sonic!
Sonic: Oh yeah, well you’re fat! Wanna not marry me now? (ducks behind a confused Tails)
Amy: If I had any idea where you were I’d slap you for thinking my love for you is so material! But seeing as how you disappeared ever since Tails came into the room, I guess I’ll have to give up for now.
(Amy walks up to Tails and looks around him as Sonic creeps around in the opposite direction to avoid her view. Amy even picks Tails up over her head with Sonic clinging to him but still finds nothing. Tails is utterly baffled when Amy places them back down but cheers up when he hears a dinging.)
Tails: Oh boy! The pizza rolls are ready!
Eggman, Rouge, and Amy: PIZZA ROLLS!? YAY!
Tails: Hold on. I’ll go get them right now!
(Tails walks out of the room, leaving Sonic in clear view of Amy. Sonic screams and lunges for the door but Amy manages to cut him off and catches him on her shoulder. She begins to carry Sonic towards the broken window but suddenly, a flash of white light cuts her off. The white flash is Shadow teleporting. Amy’s jaw drops and she instantly drops Sonic as she runs up to the black hedgehog.)
Amy (seductively): Hey Shadow. What are you doing here?
(Shadow pushes Amy away, only to make her like him even more and she shyly admires him from a distance, leaving Sonic free.)
Sonic (getting up to his feet): Shadow? Shoot, how many more people are gonna show up here?
Shadow: Hey Sonic, me and my androids are gonna crash here and ‘cause we’re strong silent loners so nobody’ll ask why. And don’t bother asking why ‘cause we won’t answer.
Sonic: What androids?
(Suddenly, ten more Shadows teleport into the room followed by hundreds more outside the house. All of the androids enter the house as Sonic stares confusedly.)
Sonic: What the!?
Shadow: Hey Sonic, where’s your androids? Wait, do you have any androids? Hey androids, Sonic doesn’t have any androids!
(The androids in the room point and laugh at Sonic and his lack of androids.)
Eggman: You know, technically you’re my androids since I made you.
Shadow: Shut up Fatman.
Eggman: Normally I wouldn’t…But since you’re a strong silent loner with cool androids, I will.
Rouge: I wish I had androids.
Amy: Wow, all of your androids are cool! Can I have one?
Shadow: No.
Amy: You’re so cool!
(Tails comes back into the room wearing a French maid’s outfit and dragging a wagon full of pizza rolls.)
Sonic (appalled by the dress): TAILS!?
Tails: Sorry I took so long but I had to make extra pizza rolls for Shadow’s androids.
(Tails pulls the wagon out into the middle of the room. But before anyone can eat them though, Shadow kicks the wagon, spilling the rolls all over the floor.)
Shadow: Make it again.
Tails (annoyed by the spillage): …Okay.
(Tails begins to walk out but Sonic grabs him by the shoulder and rips the dress off of him.)
Sonic: Tails, what are you doing? This is your house and they came uninvited!
Tails: But if I don’t get going now, I won’t be able to make deviled eggs for Team Chaotix and refill Big’s keg.
Sonic: What!?
(Sonic follows Tails downstairs and watches as Big the Cat is chugging from a keg as Vector, Espio, Charmy, and the Shadow androids chant the “chug” chant.)
Sonic: WHAT THE!? Tails, why are you doing this?
Tails: What do you mean?
Sonic: We came here to look at the portal and you’re serving everyone here when they didn’t even ask. Furthermore, they treat you like crap.
(Tails stares blankly at Sonic, not getting the hint. Sonic rolls his eyes as he lifts Tails over his shoulder and forcibly carries him upstairs and back into his room. He puts his friend down and is about to tell everyone to clear out when he sees Cream the Rabbit doing Amy’s hair.)
Sonic: What’s going on here!?
Amy: Oh, I invited Cream here.
Shadow: Where’s our pizza rolls!?
Tails: I’ll get them!
(Tails tries to run out but Sonic stops him. He’s about to yell at everyone when suddenly, through the torn off roof, everyone sees red clouds gathering in the sky. They swirl together and thunder claps as hundreds of Black Arms aliens rain from the sky, crashing through parts of Tails’ house. Black Doom himself flies into the room with the portal in it. Tails cowers behind Sonic while Cream, not so much.)
Shadow: Find the place alright?
Black Doom: Your directions were precise.
Sonic: Wait….You’re that black alien leader!
Black Doom: Yes. And yet, I still don’t know who you are. Come to think of it, I only know Shadow and the stupid scientist.
Eggman: HEY!
Sonic: ….Shadow, did you invite these guys?
Shadow: Maybe.
Sonic: Why?
Shadow: Maybe.
Sonic: …(Sigh) How can this get any worse?
(Just then, Chaos and Tikal walk in through the door with their Chaos following them. Tikal is staggering around as if she were dizzy as Chaos is eating a bowl of pretzels.)
Tikal: Like….do you know where the bathroom ish? I really have to….uh-oh!
(Tikal vomits on the floor. Tails frowns as he goes off to find a mop. By now, Sonic is too aggravated to stop his friend. He holds his sinus and his eyebrows quiver before he looks at Tikal who is struggling to stand up straight.)
Sonic: What are you two doing here?
Tikal: We heard like there was this super awesome party….And I was like “Hey Chaos….Like, let’s go that rave!” And the Chaos was like (deepening her voice to imitate Chaos) “Nah dude….(begins to laugh but tries to kill it) Like….let’s go that party at that kid’s house. I hear they got free booze there.” So then I was like-
Sonic: Wait, Tails doesn’t have any alcoholic drinks here….And when did you start speaking like that? Last time I saw you were serious.
Tikal (as Chaos makes a surfer hand gesture, still eating the pretzels): Uh-ooooooh….I think someone put something in my drink then…..(vomits)
Black Doom: That would be my soldiers. We came here and poured gallons and gallons of vodka into every source of beverage. Even the water supply has been tainted! Soon, everyone in this house will become a drunk mob and riot throughout this secluded island, causing no harm to the public but tearing this house to shreds! Maybe even that sorry excuse of an air fleet the doctor has flying over the house.
Eggman: You wanna go floating boy?
Black Doom: YES!
Eggman (sinking down in his Eggmobile): No thanks. You’re cool.
Rouge: HEY!
Sonic: What?
Rouge: I haven’t said anything for a while…Also, Omega’s here.
Sonic: Huh?
(Sonic turns around to see E-123 Omega shooting at one of the room’s walls with its chain guns. Sonic runs up to him, waving his arms.)
Sonic: What are you doing!?
(Omega turns its head to Sonic while still continuing to shoot the wall. Omega just stares at Sonic and doesn’t say anything. Sonic raises his eyebrow and then hangs his head in his hand before kicking the robot to the side.)
Omega: Attack was not called for. I am now experiencing rage.
Sonic: You were shooting Tails’ wall!
Eggman: Doesn’t mean you have to kick him.
Omega: EGGMAN! MUST DESTROY EGGMAN!
(Omega lunges at Eggman’s Eggmobile and sends it towards the broken window. At this time, Knuckles is getting back up, battered and bruised.)
Knuckles: Sorry I didn’t get back sooner but those androids and the aliens almost tore me limb-from-limb. Anyway, I’m ba-OOF!
(Omega and Eggman crash into Knuckles, sending all three down to the ground again with a large splash of Black Arms and Shadow androids flying up as they do so. Everyone just stares at the scene, not saying anything. The silence is eventually broken by Chaos munching on more pretzels as Tikal passes out. Tails then rushes through the door and slams it behind him, panting as he holds a bucket and a scrub brush. Sonic walks up to him, concerned.)
Sonic: Tails! What happened?
Tails (panting): They…they tried to….get me to….sing karaoke!
(Everyone in the room screams in terror, even Black Doom and the Shadows. Tails begins sobbing as he buries his face in Sonic’s chest and the hedgehog hugs him back. Sonic tries to calm the hysteric fox down by patting him on the back.)
Sonic (still patting Tails): Okay, I want ALL OF YOU to clear out! NOW!
(Before anyone can comply, a pool of liquid metal surfaces behind Sonic. Everyone points to the thing behind him but Sonic misinterprets it as them pointing at him.)
Sonic: Look-
(Sonic is cut short when the pool turns out to be Metal Sonic. The robot instantly grabs Sonic by the shoulders and throws him through the wall behind them, leaving Tails in the room. Metal Sonic then jumps on Sonic’s chest repeatedly until the floor underneath them breaks and they fall onto a Twister mat where Vector is trying to put his tail on a red circle. When the Sonics crash down, all of the androids, aliens, detectives, and cats are blown away. Metal Sonic then starts slashing Sonic up with its claws. Sonic manages to grab the machine’s arms and kick its back, sending into a wall. Sonic then Homing Attacks it through the wall but is soon judo flipped off the small cliff that Tails’ house is on. When Sonic crashes onto his back, Metal Sonic drives itself into him and continues to beat him. During the massacre, androids and Black Arms are placing bets on who will win. Metal Sonic grabs Sonic by the neck and slams him against the cliff and brings one clawed hand back, ready to stab the hero.)
Metal Sonic: At long last Sonic, I will fulfill my programming and destroy you!
Sonic (choking): Wait….Answer me this first.
Metal Sonic: Answer what?
Sonic: ….If a tree falls….and no one’s around to hear it….Does it make a sound?
Metal Sonic: Of course it does. When trees fall, they make crashes.
Sonic: …But…how can there be a sound if no one can hear it?
Metal Sonic: ….Well, there would obviously be some birds nearby-
Sonic: No one’s there.
Metal Sonic: ….A tree crashes….but no one can hear it….It would have to make a sound but how can there be sound if no one hears it?…..(electricity begins to surge through Metal Sonic’s head as well as those of the androids’)….Does not compute…..PARADOX OVERLOAD!
(Every nearby android’s head explodes as Metal Sonic is covered in electricity and shorts out. Sonic kicks the deactivated robot off of himself and takes a moment to catch his breath.)
Sonic: Phew…Thank you faulty programming.
(Sonic eventually recovers and is about to run up the cliff when Tails flies down and carries him up to the house. Panning back down to Metal Sonic, we see its eyes light up again with dramatic music playing. Back at Tails’ room, Sonic is quite angry as everyone there is now disco dancing.)
Sonic: Okay guys! Enough is enough! We came here for the portal, not to babysit you!
Amy (who now has a mow hawk thanks to Cream): Not now Sonic. I almost got one of Shadow’s androids!
(Sonic growls in anger, jumps up to the disco ball, and shatters it with a kick. Everyone instantly stops dancing and stares at Sonic angrily.)
Sonic: Between the portal, Tails’ sucking up to you, and your taking advantage of him, I don’t know what to think! Now GET OUT!
(Everyone hangs their head down and begins dragging their feet out of the room, even Rouge who still has the Master Emerald. Black Doom floats by the portal that almost everyone overlooked and turns his attention to it.)
Black Doom: Is this the portal?
Sonic: Yeah. Why? You know anything about it?
Black Doom: Yes. I’ve been all over the universe and have seen all that there is to see-
Sonic: And yet the only people on Earth that you know are Shadow and Eggman.
Black Doom: Shut up. Anyway, I’ve seen this phenomena many a times. It is a portal created link worlds together.
Sonic: We already know that.
Black Doom: Would you let me finish!? Geez! Anyway, this did not occur naturally. Someone made it, placed in this spot right when this planet was being formed. The same person made portals just like it in all other parts of the universe. Countless galaxies and planets have been linked through these portals.
Tails (still a little intimidated by Black Doom): Then why didn’t we see it before?
Black Doom: The creator of the portals expands their sizes at random intervals that are pre-determined and carefully calculated.
Tails: Huh?
Black Doom: Just go with it. Furthermore, he makes these portals in the hopes that the people in the galaxies will tamper with them and go to other worlds where they will be relocated to another world.
Sonic: Why does he do that?
Black Doom: Basically, he likes to screw with people and this is his idea of a practical joke.
Sonic: Hmmm….This portal scheme sounds fishy….But is it really that bad?
Black Doom: Um….sure. People have been stranded in other worlds as the portals shrunk behind them. Families have been torn apart and sometimes these portals lead to the vacuum of space where people die slowly and agonizingly. Sometimes he even takes the heroes of worlds away which leaves kingdoms and nations defenseless.
Sonic: Really? Now I’m starting to not like this. Whose the one making these portals? Where can we find him?
Black Doom: He likes to go by the name of “Dude” sometimes “Shadowy Dude” or occasionally “Whose that Dude?” As for his location, he’s right over there, trying to sneak through he portal before you can catch him.
(Black Doom moves to the side, revealing the Dude from chapter 2, remember him? Well, he’s right in front of the portal, tiptoeing before he freezes and awkwardly stares at Sonic and Tails.)
Dude: Uhh…..
(The dude then jumps through the portal. Sonic and Tails exchange a look and nod. Sonic runs towards the portal while Tails begins scrubbing the vomit off of his floor. Sonic stops just in front of the portal.)
Sonic: Tails?
Tails: Huh? Oh, right, the portal.
(Tails runs up to Sonic and the two look at the portal grimly. Tails gulps as Sonic cracks a grin.)
Sonic: Can’t wait to see what’s on the other side.
Tails: Are you sure it’s safe?
(Before Sonic can answer, I--THE SUPER AWESOME NINJA BOT, push them through the portal where they are sucked away to another dimension! Black Doom then looks at me as I announce all of this.)
Black Doom: What are you doing here?
(I’m here basically because Chasm and Twig cameoed before so I wanna be part of the trend and possibly mess up Sage of Light or whoever will write episode four.)
Black Doom: Would you just speak normally?
(Um, no…..eat me.)
Black Doom: Very well.
(Black doom opens a humungous and previously unseen mouth and comes towards me….Wait, that’s not good.)
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Stoic and proud, you work well with a team, but are better on your own. You love technology and exotic locales, but often are left to your own devices. Keep the helmet on, you look cooler.
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Posted February 23rd, 2006 11:04 PM IP
(well now. i think i shall join this also. because i have nothing better to do.)
Chapter 4: Sol's section of space
Sol was sitting in his little palace of darkness, inside a giant volcano (of course), sipping liquid magma with a slice of lemon for taste. He was watching the events at Tail's house unfold on a giant screen tv (about 30'x40'. yeah.), laughing to himself whenever something completely random happened.
Sol: When will they learn? No one can stop the force that is a mob of freeloaders.
[a portal opens up in the back of the room, sucking in one or two globs of magma and a tank of nitroglycerin (just cause i feel like it). some weird dude runs out, obviously scared of something behind him.]
Sol: Who are you?
Dude: uhhhh....*faints at sight of demon*
Sol: Crap.
[Sol teleports Dude to his secret lab and puts him in a stasis chamber.]
Sol: There.
[Sonic and Tails run through the portal, suprised at where they are. They notice Sol, standing with a tray of freezing drinks for them.]
Sol: Anyone want lemonade?
Sonic: Hey! You're that demon guy from that time way back when!
*Tails cannot say anything, due to the lack of consciousness*
Sol: Oops.
Sonic: It's not your- wait, it is your fault. Great, now I gotta revive him again.
Sol: Sorry. Hey, do you know a weird Dude? He came running in here-
*A huge explosion rocks the volcano*
Sonic: What the crap was that?!
Sol: Hmm. It came from the direction of the fox's house.*looks around* Hey, where did my magma and nitroglycerin go?
*Sonic smiles slightly, looking past Sol at the MegaTV, as it shows Shadow and Co. running around, flailing their arms, all on fire........except Tikal, who is still passed out, vomit oozing from her mouth.*
*Sol turns around*
Sol: Ooh. Lovely. Ugh.
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Posted February 24th, 2006 08:40 PM IP
Interesting. However, I have many a things to say:
1) Did we determine that Sage would write ch. 4?
2) Sol, I'd suggest dropping that relavance that Sonic knows you via the collab from that story that we dropped but that's just me (not trying to write for you)
3) Is there more to this chapter (sorry, very mean thing to ask)
4) Does anyone here think that I revealed too much about the Dude and the portals too early in the series? Cause I can totally rewrite the ending to ch. 3 if you think we should take it slower.
PS- Thanks a lot Sol! I had plans for Sonic and Tails...then again, it's a collab so never mind.
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Yoshi-TRM
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Posted February 24th, 2006 10:22 PM IP
Hey, is it too late to join this? I just love participating in these sorts of things. I don't really care what Content I do, as long as I'm familiar with it. Oh! I know~! I could do a Zelda episode, I always wanted to try my hand at Zelda Fanfiction. just tell me if I can. if I can't, it's cool. But I will get on the next one! BUAHAHAHAHA!!!
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TheTwig
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Posted February 25th, 2006 07:19 AM IP
IU don't think the timing matters.
Sol, we had already decided that Sage would be writing Chapter 4...
There are three ways of dealing with time travel in Doctor Who (you might want to print this out for future use.)
1. Look, it's just a story, time travel is completely impossible, the whole thing's a farrago of lies, ooh, look at those monsters.
2. Time can only sometimes be rewritten, and the Doctor has a vast and terrible Time Brain that allows him to see when events can be altered and when they are fixed, but for us mere mortals, such insight would turn our brains to soup, ooh, look at those monsters.
3. Ooh, look at those monsters!
I like 3. It's quicker.
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The Sage of Light
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Posted February 25th, 2006 09:37 AM IP
Actually, I'm still so busy I'll just get bumped back up, so anyone go ahead of me.
RAWR, I'M A FIRE DRAGON... But not a flamer, at least XD
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Yoshi-TRM
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Posted February 25th, 2006 02:50 PM IP
hey, cool. Just tell me what chapter I am and what I'm supposed to be doing, and I'm in.
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Chasm
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Posted February 25th, 2006 05:35 PM IP
This is getting somewhat out of hand, so let me, as our official story creator/hitler impersonator, lay down the LAW!
1. NB, nice work, I like where this is going and i think you can just send this episode in. Thanks to thou, I got an idea about where this story is headed now... 
2. To those who just joined us, this story is basically a way to screw around and put our fav. characters from VGs, tv shows, hell whatever, into one big poorly written masterpiece. Small cameos are okay, like what has been done. But PLEASE, don't make yourself a main char. It makes the small children cry.
3. This isn't like a story in the "collab stories" section. We've been submitting these, so any chapters you wanna make part of the real storyline have to be posted here first and reviewed by a board of highly trained monkeys.
4. I decided that having 1 fairly coherent storyline would be a good idea, so as soon as I get fin. with this extremely large post, I have an idea i wanna run by twig and NB.
I'll post again if I can think of anything else.CIAO!
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Posted February 25th, 2006 07:20 PM IP
yeah, Sol, what he said.
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Ninja Bot
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Posted February 25th, 2006 11:46 PM IP
Wow. Thanks for the complements. Well, got your PM. I love the direction you want to take this in and love the fact that I inspired it. I'll send my episode when I get the message that ProZD is updating the Studios. I look forward to seeing our upcoming roster....of writers and chapters that is.
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Posted February 26th, 2006 12:49 AM IP
Hello, all.
I'm interested in writing an episode. One of the later ones though. How about...Episode 10, I guess? Sure.
Whatever you guys decide.
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Posted February 26th, 2006 05:19 AM IP
Neato.
ProZD, GUEST WRITER!
Loving your Secret Plan, Chasm...
There are three ways of dealing with time travel in Doctor Who (you might want to print this out for future use.)
1. Look, it's just a story, time travel is completely impossible, the whole thing's a farrago of lies, ooh, look at those monsters.
2. Time can only sometimes be rewritten, and the Doctor has a vast and terrible Time Brain that allows him to see when events can be altered and when they are fixed, but for us mere mortals, such insight would turn our brains to soup, ooh, look at those monsters.
3. Ooh, look at those monsters!
I like 3. It's quicker.
Steven Moffat
Yes, he's taking over Doctor Who in 2010. YEEESSSS!
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Chasm
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Posted February 26th, 2006 08:34 AM IP
Alright, so who wants #4?
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Yoshi-TRM
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Posted February 26th, 2006 06:12 PM IP
maybe me! maybe...I'll think about it. I guess I'll get Bowser into the story or something.
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Posted February 27th, 2006 09:58 PM IP
Quote:
Yoshi-TRM wrote:
yeah, Sol, what he said.
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jeez, sorry. i didn't know. because i didn't care to look.
but, seeing as how everyone is mad now, i think i'll just say:
just an idea for the storyline.....and to get myself into it.
thank you.
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Posted February 28th, 2006 12:27 PM IP
We're not having anyone as a main character...
Agreed?
There are three ways of dealing with time travel in Doctor Who (you might want to print this out for future use.)
1. Look, it's just a story, time travel is completely impossible, the whole thing's a farrago of lies, ooh, look at those monsters.
2. Time can only sometimes be rewritten, and the Doctor has a vast and terrible Time Brain that allows him to see when events can be altered and when they are fixed, but for us mere mortals, such insight would turn our brains to soup, ooh, look at those monsters.
3. Ooh, look at those monsters!
I like 3. It's quicker.
Steven Moffat
Yes, he's taking over Doctor Who in 2010. YEEESSSS!
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Yoshi-TRM
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Posted February 28th, 2006 04:55 PM IP
I was joking, Sol. Calm down. As to Twig, I guess so. But as of now I probably don't have much athority.
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Chasm
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Posted February 28th, 2006 07:52 PM IP
Yeh. I sounded a little violent... my bad.
Twig, i totally agree. Sol and TRM, you guys should read eps. 1-3, which are now up. Get a good idea of what were doing. What are we doing? Whoever gets #4 will find out my super-secret plan... (twitches evilly)
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Ninja Bot
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Posted February 28th, 2006 08:06 PM IP
NEEAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tis a despicable plan indeed! Anyway, does either one of you want to write the chapter more than the other or should we have a random number generator? Do I have any say in who gets to write next?
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Yoshi-TRM
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Posted February 28th, 2006 09:11 PM IP
oh, hey Chasm. I noticed someting strange. We are really alike. Our avatars are both grey yoshis that are in league with Bowser in some way at some point in time. Our stories both have something to do with bowser accidentally(or not) creating something evil and unleashing it on an unsuspecting world. And, weirdest of all, we both have a yoshi named Toshi in our stories!
by the way, as I said, I wouldn't mind doing Chapter 4. I'll just have to read chapter three first. I guess I'll get Bowser into the mix. You can PM me with what your super secret plan is...*twitches evilly in return*
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Ninja Bot
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Posted March 1st, 2006 08:26 PM IP
Indeed, READ MY CHAPTER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!....Sorry. I tend to go insane every now and then when I find out people will actually read something I wrote. Um....I really have nothing constructive to say.
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Yoshi-TRM
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Posted March 1st, 2006 08:27 PM IP
I did. It's really great. How about you read MY stuff now! I will force feed it down your throat!
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Ninja Bot
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Posted March 2nd, 2006 06:11 PM IP
GAH! Geez! Didn't you read the Story Trailer post? I said I would....just that my Ninja Bot Mobile doesn't go very fast.
(Is currently sitting in NB Mobile and is still going at 2 mph)
So....we have a definite author for episode 4 or what?
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Posted March 2nd, 2006 06:42 PM IP
I guess. ME!!
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Chasm
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Posted March 3rd, 2006 03:53 PM IP
Hmm... TRM, that IS truly scary... I wonder what happens if you kill your doppelganger....
*pulls out rifle and snickers*
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Posted March 3rd, 2006 06:05 PM IP
so aren't you going to PM me with the stuff?
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