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Ninja Bot
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 Posted April 26th, 2006 05:16 PM IP   
Sorry I haven't read it yet. A chapter of SS3 kept me from the forums for a day or two then I had to catch up with it. Then ProZD sent in LFtM and I didn't get the chance to do much of anything else yet. Though everything is out of the way for now so once I don't have school stuff to do, I'll get to reading it...and then wonder what's going to happen next cause you don't finish chapters in one sitting.
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Yoshi-TRM
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Posted April 27th, 2006 03:21 PM IP
I could've this time. But I didn't. I'm almost finished the second part, though.
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Posted April 30th, 2006 12:12 AM IP
Good. Cause I want to see what happens after you get shot. I can't say what I thought of this portion so far cause you know...it didn't end yet. Though I like that you keep Bowser around for comical scenes. Other than that, not enough info to judge though I'm hoping you live....By the way, are you still reading and being disgusted by SS1 or have you secretly quit?
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Posted April 30th, 2006 02:53 PM IP
umm, I haven't had time lateley. I'll get to reading them though. in fact, I think I'll go and read a chapter or so right now.
I managed to read a part of chapter five, but I've got to do something. It's getting lots better, my only complaint is that you still talk with the reader. If you aren't sure about the specifications of something, either make it look like you know what you're talking about, or avoid the subject entirely, in the case with the "hot shot".
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Posted April 30th, 2006 03:31 PM IP
I don't quite remember that situation right now but I'm pretty sure I got a Hot Shot confused with a Big Foot or something. Anyway, thanks for your optimism and the fact that you read when you can. Sorry that wasn't aware that you were busy.
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Posted April 30th, 2006 06:07 PM IP
It's okay. I'm hoping that I'll be able to finish the second part of chapter three by this weekend, It was supposed to be short but it's really running away from me, if you know what I mean. It's almost longer than the first part of the chapter now.
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Posted May 2nd, 2006 07:57 PM IP
Woah. Sweetness. Looking forward to it and in all of its lengthy glory.
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Posted May 3rd, 2006 03:56 PM IP
It's officially longer than part one. And it includes a flashback. And some more suspense. and some really awesome stuff. And it's almost done. And it'll be up by sunday at the most.
Oh, to clear a few things up, I call Koopas "Koopas" when they are affiliated with Bowser in any way. When they are neutral or just not on Bowser's side, I've decided to call them "Terrapins" like everybody else. Because they aren't really Koopa Troopas.
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Posted May 3rd, 2006 06:44 PM IP
Good to know. That'll clear things up when I see the terms tossed around...or just tell me that there's a point to it other than you not wanting to use the same word over and over again.
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Posted May 3rd, 2006 07:57 PM IP
yeah, I finished it, and sent it, expect it on saturday.
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Posted May 4th, 2006 07:51 PM IP
Sweetness. Uh...nothing else to say. Just didn't want to send in a one word post.
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Posted May 6th, 2006 01:11 PM IP
It should be in today, if ProZD has time to update. Tell me what you think.
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Posted May 8th, 2006 05:49 PM IP
Haven't read it yet and it may take me a day or two. But I'll get to it.
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Posted May 8th, 2006 05:56 PM IP
okay. It's really good, just to tell you.
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Posted May 8th, 2006 09:51 PM IP
this is about your story, right? I may check it out myself, if I ever have time.
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Posted May 10th, 2006 05:29 PM IP
Go. You won't regret it. it's gooood.
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Posted May 12th, 2006 09:33 PM IP
Okay, sorry for the delay. I read it a few days ago. The action was good and I like how you finally went into some of the characters' past. However, it might have just been a little too action-based with perhaps not enough story to it. Then again, you're just starting and to be fair, I was still a little depressed after having seen Sonic X 78...or was it 77; either way, my judgement may or may have not been clouded just a bit. Overall, the action was good and you're finally telling us who these people are. However, no Bowser. What's up with that?
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Posted May 13th, 2006 01:14 PM IP
Bowser's bit of the plot was done for the chapter. I wanted to focus on my main characters.
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Posted May 13th, 2006 08:53 PM IP
Oh, right. I forgot that this was still the same chapter. Anyway, still good.
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Posted May 15th, 2006 03:03 PM IP
I'm going to start on the next chapter soon, this time I promise it'll be in one piece.
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Posted May 16th, 2006 07:18 PM IP
Really!? Sweetness. That'll make it easier to read. Also, have you been busy lately cause I was just wondering if you've had any time to read SS1. If you haven't I understand and I'm not trying to rush you or anything. Just asking.
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Posted May 17th, 2006 05:15 PM IP
I've been busy. this is the only time in the last three days that I've been abel to to log on. And I'm not even supposed to be home right now. I'm late.
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Posted May 18th, 2006 06:50 PM IP
Ooh dang. Sorry to bother you then. Good luck with whatever you were late to.
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Posted May 19th, 2006 08:08 PM IP
it's cool. I'll read it when I can.
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Posted August 22nd, 2006 05:19 AM IP
Man: You know, when I first met Twig, I thought he was a nice person. I really did. He came up to me, and offered me a chance I couldn't refuse. The whole of Time and Space.
Man: My Mind's changed now. I don't know what he wants. But he must be stopped.
(We cut to a shot of a blood stained knife in a hand, and in a quick pan up we see that it is the Eighth Twig holding the knife.)
Man: This is my story. My name is John. This is my story. The story of my Revelation.
(Text appears in bold, striking type.)
700 Years after Extratus...
Something wicked this way come. (The knife shown slashes acroiss the screen)
Coming soon...
There are three ways of dealing with time travel in Doctor Who (you might want to print this out for future use.)
1. Look, it's just a story, time travel is completely impossible, the whole thing's a farrago of lies, ooh, look at those monsters.
2. Time can only sometimes be rewritten, and the Doctor has a vast and terrible Time Brain that allows him to see when events can be altered and when they are fixed, but for us mere mortals, such insight would turn our brains to soup, ooh, look at those monsters.
3. Ooh, look at those monsters!
I like 3. It's quicker.
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Posted August 24th, 2006 12:31 AM IP
I think there's something wrong with your trailer Twig. It's depicting you as the villain. What's up with that? Sure, it was thrilling and awesome but whoever made your trailer is making grave acccusations about comma you.
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Posted August 24th, 2006 12:31 AM IP
I think there's something wrong with your trailer Twig. It's depicting you as the villain. What's up with that? Sure, it was thrilling and awesome but whoever made your trailer is making grave acccusations about comma you.
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Posted August 24th, 2006 04:56 AM IP
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!
DOUBLE POST!
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAGH!
And the trailer is perfectly correct...
There are three ways of dealing with time travel in Doctor Who (you might want to print this out for future use.)
1. Look, it's just a story, time travel is completely impossible, the whole thing's a farrago of lies, ooh, look at those monsters.
2. Time can only sometimes be rewritten, and the Doctor has a vast and terrible Time Brain that allows him to see when events can be altered and when they are fixed, but for us mere mortals, such insight would turn our brains to soup, ooh, look at those monsters.
3. Ooh, look at those monsters!
I like 3. It's quicker.
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Posted August 24th, 2006 11:18 PM IP
...I think Lawrencio, Pheona, and Cappriccio better hide from you.
From what I could decipher of the poem... Yeah... This will be a chilling tale.
RAWR, I'M A FIRE DRAGON... But not a flamer, at least XD
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Posted August 25th, 2006 08:38 AM IP
It's the Eigth Twig, the onme from Extratus..
By then, Lawrencio will be long gone, and Capriccio has already died died anyways. But I know where Pheona is...
There are three ways of dealing with time travel in Doctor Who (you might want to print this out for future use.)
1. Look, it's just a story, time travel is completely impossible, the whole thing's a farrago of lies, ooh, look at those monsters.
2. Time can only sometimes be rewritten, and the Doctor has a vast and terrible Time Brain that allows him to see when events can be altered and when they are fixed, but for us mere mortals, such insight would turn our brains to soup, ooh, look at those monsters.
3. Ooh, look at those monsters!
I like 3. It's quicker.
Steven Moffat
Yes, he's taking over Doctor Who in 2010. YEEESSSS!
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